Guest Post: Light in the Darkness

Guest blogger: Jessica R. Patch

“The Word gave life to everything that was created, and his life brought light to everyone. The light shines in the darkness, and the darkness can never extinguish it.” ~John 1:4-5

Roanoke Marshes Lighthouse

In my newest thriller, The Garden Girls, my villain places victims at lighthouses to cast light on them, to spotlight his wicked work as he’s tattooed flowers on their bodies. He thinks he is a god of his own making and that he is invincible.

But darkness is not invincible. It never has been. It never will be.

The night Jesus was arrested he spoke to the Pharisees and He said, “Why didn’t you arrest me in the Temple? I was there every day. But this is your moment, the time when the power of darkness reigns.” (Luke 22:53)

In this one moment, darkness had its way but even then, God was still sovereign. Darkness was wielded for God’s redemptive purposes and Jesus allowed Himself to be hung on that cross to set us free, to show us light in darkness, to bring us hope, to rescue us and one day He’ll guide us home.

Cape Hatteras

Darkness seems to reign in The Garden Girls and what’s happening isn’t edited out, as the Bible doesn’t edit out darkness, but the Light does shine. God uses that darkness for His own redemptive purposes and we see the sacrificial love displayed in a beautiful moment.

Lighthouses are beacons of light, leading the blind to shore, to safety. Without the light, ships would crash and people would be lost. I wanted to use them in the books to showcase that even though it appears tragedy and darkness overpowered the beauty of light—it does not. The light is far greater, and stronger than that.

Sometimes evil masquerades as an angel of light, as my villain does in The Garden Girls, but I assure you, he’s only reigning in darkness for a moment.

Then light shines!

Do you like lighthouses? Have you ever been inside one?


About the Story:

FBI agent Tiberius Granger has seen his share of darkness. But a new case sets him on edge. It’s not just the macabre way both victims—found posed in front of lighthouses—are tattooed with flowers that match their names. There’s also the unsettling connection to the woman Ty once loved and to the shadowy cult they both risked everything to escape.

Bexley Hemmingway’s sister has gone missing, and she’ll do anything to find her—including teaming up with Ty. That may prove a mistake, and not just because Ty doesn’t know he’s the father of her teenaged son. It seems the killer is taunting Ty, drawing everyone close to him into deeper danger.

As the slashing winds and rain of a deadly hurricane approach the coast of North Carolina, the search leads Ty and Bex to an island that hides a grisly secret. But in his quest for the truth, Ty has ignored the fact that this time, he’s not just the hunter. Every move has been orchestrated by a killer into a perfect storm of terror, and they will need all their skills to survive…

Read Eli’s review of The Garden Girls.

About the Author:

Jessica R. Patch is a Publishers Weekly bestselling author known for her dry wit, signature twists, and complex characters. She loves reading true crime books, discussing cold cases over chips and salsa, and hunting down serial killers in her romantic suspense novels and thrillers. She resides in the Memphis area with her family and her spoiled Shetland Sheepdog. Subscribe to her monthly newsletter, Patched In, at her website and receive a free short thriller.

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Guest Post: 5 Tips for Creating a Strong Plot

Guest blogger: DiAnn Mills

Our characters may be magnificently crafted, our dialogue perfect in rhythm and purpose, our setting, description, and emotion all masterfully written, but without a strong plot, our stories fall flat.

A strong plot shows a slice of life and how real characters choose to reach a goal or solve a problem. The story entertains, inspires, and encourages the reader with the ebb and flow of an exciting adventure.

By following a few guidelines, a writer can take readers on an adventure that keeps them gasping for breath and turning pages.

Know your point of view (POV) character.

Every plot needs a story player or players. Know your character(s) inside and out, including backstory. This process ushers in motivation. Spend time understanding the character’s fears with the caveat that internal fears must seize victory before an external fear can be overcome and the story goal reached.

Use these four questions to evaluate every scene.

  1. What is the POV character’s problem or goal?
  2. What does the POV character learn that is new information?
  3. What backstory is revealed? Hold onto the reins of backstory for the first approximately fifty pages. Also avoid showing the POV character’s flaws or weaknesses for the same length of time. These two techniques allow the reader to form a critical bond with the character.
  4. How are the stakes raised?

Build momentum in each scene.

Each scene builds on the previous one to create stress, tension, and conflict. That means scene ten can’t happen without one through nine until the climax. Another way to build momentum is to keep the narrative skinny.

 Keep the middle lean.

A story starts strong and keeps the reader engaged. The ending ties up loose ends in a satisfactory way. But the middle can’t add extra weight or the story becomes too heavy for the reader. In other words, it becomes boring.

Toss a wrench into the middle of the story.

I question readers who brag about reading to the first doorway of a novel, then skipping to the climax because the plot is predictable. A writer can create the unpredictable and unexpected that is character-driven by tossing a plot twist in the approximate middle of the story. This technique changes everything and keeps readers engaged through to the last page.

A writer can use these guidelines to engross readers in the best story possible. As readers, we can recognize and appreciate the power of a good story, and maybe even take a moment to send our favorite writers an email or social media message with a sincere thank-you for an amazing plot.


About the Story:

When the long-awaited reunion between Risa and her brother, Trenton, ends in tragedy, Risa is riddled with guilt, unable to cope with the responsibility she feels over his death. On leave from the FBI, Risa returns to her former career as an English teacher at a local college, only to see her past and present collide when one of her students, Carson Mercury, turns in an assignment that reads like an eyewitness account of her brother’s murder, with details never revealed publicly.

Alarmed by Carson’s inside knowledge of Trenton’s death, Risa reaches out to her former partner at the FBI. Special Agent Gage Patterson has been working a string of baby kidnappings, but he agrees to help look into Carson’s background. Risa and Gage soon discover their cases might be connected as a string of high-value thefts have occurred at properties where security systems were installed by Carson’s stepfather and children have gone missing. There’s a far more sinister plot at play than they ever imagined, and innocent lives are in danger.

About the Author:

Photo Credit: Lynette Eason, 2022

DiAnn Mills is a bestselling author who believes her readers should expect an adventure. She creates action-packed, suspense-filled novels to thrill readers. Her titles have appeared on the CBA and ECPA bestseller lists and won two Christy Awards, the Golden Scroll, Inspirational Reader’s Choice, and Carol Award contests. DiAnn’s latest novel, Facing the Enemy, releases from Tyndale in September 2023.

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Guest Post: The Real Bonnie and Clyde

Guest blogger: Jennifer L. Wright

My novel The Girl from the Papers is inspired by the lives of the notorious Great Depression–era criminals Bonnie and Clyde. Centered on the dangerous combination of love, pride, and reckless ambition, the story examines the motivations behind their crime spree as well as imagining what might have happened had they chosen a different path. Although the story is heartbreaking at times, it is my hope that readers will ultimately come away feeling inspired and optimistic, with a greater understanding of the power of God’s love and forgiveness.

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The same, unfortunately, cannot be said for the real story of Bonnie and Clyde.

Both Bonnie Parker and Clyde Barrow were born in 1910 in rural Texas, though each ended up moving to an impoverished area just outside Dallas during their youth. But while Bonnie and her family resided in Cement City, a heavily industrialized, pollution-covered area that offered low-paying, backbreaking work in the town’s many factories, the Barrow clan was not so fortunate (if fortunate is what it could be called.) Instead, as poor farmers hit hard by the post‒World War I agriculture bust, they were forced into a shanty down in West Dallas, where they survived for several months by sleeping under a wagon loaded with their few possessions near the Trinity River. Open sewers, garbage-strewn roads, and clouds of disease-ridden mosquitos only added insult to injury. The people of Dallas made no secret about how they felt toward these refugees; many, including Clyde, encountered prejudice, scorn, and even outright violence from both civilians and law enforcement alike whenever they dared cross the river into Dallas proper. Clyde performed odd jobs such as scrap metal collector, candy maker, and Western Union telegram deliverer to help make ends meet, and eventually, the family earned enough to open a small car repair shop, which had an attached house. Even then, however, Clyde struggled to shake off the shame and anger that accompanied his “lower class” status. He soon turned to a life of petty crime to get ahead.

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Meanwhile, across town, Bonnie was engaged in a battle of her own. After losing her husband in 1914, Rowena Parker, Bonnie’s mother, struggled with fits of melancholy, leaving her daughter largely unsupervised and undisciplined. Because of this, Bonnie soon became narcissistic, temperamental, and prone to fits of wildness that left those around her reeling. Bonnie was the “star” of the family, performing in pageants and plays from a young age, and she nurtured dreams of Hollywood and Broadway, which led to her dropping out of school. Instead of taking the stage, however, she got married. The groom was a man by the name of Ray Thornton, and their wedding occurred when Bonnie was only fifteen years old. Unsurprisingly, the vows didn’t stick, and soon Ray was drinking, cheating, and disappearing for days at a time. When he was arrested for theft in January 1929, Bonnie wasn’t exactly sad . . . but she also never filed for divorce. Still, it didn’t stop her from returning to her wild ways.

A year later, in January 1930, Bonnie arrived at party in West Dallas to celebrate her older brother Buster’s marriage. Also at the party? A friend of the bride’s named Clyde Barrow.

By all accounts, it was love at first sight. Frustrated by her failed acting dreams and lack of status, Bonnie was instantly drawn to the well-dressed stranger with the fancy car. Likewise, Bonnie’s good looks and obvious adoration bolstered Clyde’s tender ego. But it was their mutual determination not to accept a life of poverty—no matter the cost—that truly bonded the pair.

Within a few short weeks, Bonnie was accompanying Clyde on his crime sprees, which had matured from minor thefts to stealing cars and, soon, to armed robberies. Although Clyde was arrested several times, Bonnie remained faithful, visiting him in jail, writing him letters, and waiting patiently until his sentence was served . . . so they could begin their crime spree anew.

But on April 30, 1932, things changed. During an attempted robbery in Hillsboro, Texas, store owner J. N. Bucher was shot and killed. Bucher’s wife later identified Barrow as the man who had pulled the trigger.

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Bonnie and Clyde were no longer just a nuisance to police. They were wanted killers.

Over the next two years, Bonnie and Clyde lived on the run, stealing cars, robbing stores, and disposing of anyone who got in their way. Although the actual number is uncertain, it is believed the pair committed at least thirteen murders, including several lawmen. Words and pictures about the “Texas Rattlesnake” and his “Suicide Sal” were splattered in newspapers across the country; their popularity was second only to their violence.

It all came crashing down on May 23, 1934, when they were ambushed by a police posse near Sailes, Bienville Parish, Louisiana. One hundred and twelve bullet holes pierced the Ford V-8 in which they rode; Bonnie and Clyde were killed instantly. Both the shooting and subsequent funeral were met by an almost circus-like atmosphere, with equal parts glee, sadness, and morbid curiosity rising from the crowds that came to see both the car and their bullet-riddled bodies.

For all the fascination, when it came down to it, the entire saga of Bonnie and Clyde ultimately left nothing but at least fifteen corpses, both perpetrators and victims, in its wake, not to mention the scores of others who were affected both directly and indirectly by the crime spree. Their tale is a tragedy, in every sense of the word, marked by ruthlessness, greed, and a distinct misunderstanding of the source of one’s inherent worth.


About the Story:

Beatrice Carraway has dreams. Although she’s aged out of the childhood pageant circuit, she’s intent on carrying her talents all the way to the big screen—if only she can escape the poverty of West Dallas first. But as the Great Depression drags the working class further and further under, Beatrice struggles just to keep herself, her mother, and her younger sister afloat. After a string of failed auditions, she feels defeated.

And then in walks Jack Turner. Though Beatrice is determined to pull herself up by her bootstraps, Jack has decided on a different path out of the gutters. It isn’t long before Beatrice is swept into an exciting and glamorous life of crime beside the man she loves. Keeping one step ahead of the law, she sees her dreams of fame come true when her name and picture are plastered in newspapers across the country. Yet as their infamy grows, the distance between them widens. While Jack begins seeking bigger payouts and publicity, Beatrice starts to long for a safe, quiet life and something deeper to fill the emptiness in her soul. But when the danger of Jack’s schemes ratchets up, Beatrice fears her dreams—and her future—will end up going down in a hail of bullets.

About the Author:

Jennifer L. Wright has been writing since middle school, eventually earning a master’s degree in journalism at Indiana University. However, it took only a few short months of covering the local news for her to realize that writing fiction is much better for the soul and definitely way more fun. A born and bred Hoosier, she was plucked from the Heartland after being swept off her feet by an Air Force pilot and has spent the past decade traveling the world and, every few years, attempting to make old curtains fit in the windows of a new home. She currently resides in New Mexico with her husband, two children, one grumpy old dachshund, and her newest obsession—a guinea pig named Peanut Butter Cup.

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Guest Post: Adventures of Hanging Out in Graveyards

Guest blogger: T. I. Lowe

Magnolia Cemetery

Adventures of hanging out in a graveyard . . . Sounds a bit crazy, right? My family thought so every time I dragged them to one while doing book research for Indigo Isle. The thing about book research is that it’s an adventure in itself. I never know what I’ll uncover in my quest to know more. The wild part about that is I normally learn something new about myself in the process too.

The opening scene of Indigo Isle is set in a graveyard, Magnolia Cemetery. I actually spent a day wandering around this cemetery, which is one of the oldest in South Carolina, dating back to the 1800s. As you can imagine, the name caught my attention right off the bat, considering the title of my last book is Under the Magnolias. As I walked around this graveyard, I thought about the folks who’d been laid to rest there, numbering over thirty-three thousand! Each one had an original story unique to them, just as we do. I wondered if they were able to live their story to its fullest or had they brought regrets with them to the grave.

Magnolia Cemetery

“I Lived” by OneRepublic is one of my favorite songs. It’s all about life and how we choose to respond to it. Standing in front of gravestone after gravestone, reading the quotes underneath the identities, I decided I’d like to have “I Lived” written on mine. On the mountaintops and in the valleys, I want to live life to the fullest and feel the joy as well as the pain. You may question why on earth I’d want to feel any sort of pain. Well, it’s a part of life, the pain. And trust me, I have felt the sharp sting of it, but I’m still breathing, which means I endured it. I want to be able to say I showed up in each moment and even owned up to the mistakes I made along the way.

In Indigo Isle, my main characters, Hudson and Sonny, lived through profound mountaintops and devastating valleys, and they both carried a burden of regrets. The what-ifs and should-haves and should-not-haves. They let their regrets define them for far too long. And sure, mistakes do lend a hand in molding us, but the mistakes should never be our very definition. How we overcome the mistakes, now that should definitely be included in our definition! Thankfully, Hudson and Sonny figure this out by the end of the story. I hope you don’t wait to the end of your story to figure this out. Are you living? Showing up for every moment? Or are you stuck in the rut of regrets?

Maybe it would be beneficial for you to take an adventure around a graveyard to find a better perspective too.


About the Story:

Sonny Bates left South Carolina fifteen years ago and never looked back. Now she’s a successful Hollywood location scout who travels the world, finding perfect places for movie shoots. Home is wherever she lands, and between her busy schedule and dealing with her boss’s demands, she has little time to think about the past . . . until her latest gig lands her a stone’s throw from everything she left behind.

Searching off the coast of Charleston for a secluded site to film a key scene, Sonny wanders onto a private barrier island and encounters its reclusive owner, known by locals as the Monster of Indigo Isle. What she finds is a man much more complex than the myth.

Once a successful New York attorney, Hudson Renfrow’s grief has exiled him to his island for several years. He spends his days alone, tending his fields of indigo, then making indigo dye—and he has no interest in serving the intrusive needs of a film company or yielding to Sonny’s determined curiosity. But when a hurricane makes landfall on the Carolina coast, stranding them together, an unlikely friendship forms between the two damaged souls. Soon the gruff exterior Hudson has long hidden behind crumbles—exposing the tender part of him that’s desperate for forgiveness and a second chance.

About the Author:

Author photo by Jordyn Strickland, copyright © 2019. All rights reserved.

 

T. I. Lowe is an ordinary country girl who loves to tell extraordinary stories. She is the author of nearly twenty published novels, including her recent bestselling and critically acclaimed novel, Under the Magnolias, and her debut breakout, Lulu’s Café. Hew newest book, Indigo Isle, releases in June 2023. She lives with her husband and family in coastal South Carolina.

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How Hitler Infiltrated 1930s Hollywood And the Little-Known Jewish Lawyer Who Stopped Him

Guest blogger: Stephanie Landsem

Leon Lewis was right. The Nazis had come to Los Angeles.

Problem was, nobody seemed to care.

It sounds too outrageous to be true: Nazis invading Hollywood. Threats against famous actors and film directors. Plots against Jewish synagogues and neighborhoods. And a Jewish spymaster who stopped it all.

But as I researched my novel Code Name Edelweiss, I found the old adage to be correct: truth really is stranger than fiction.

In the early 1930s, the United States was plummeting into what was to be known as the Great Depression. Millions were out of work. The government was scrambling to help but families were suffering from deprivation and hunger. Corruption was rampant in both government and industry; racial tensions were rising, as was the crime rate. Most Americans weren’t concerned about the new German chancellor, Adolf Hitler.

But Hitler was already looking at America—and especially Hollywood. He knew that the film industry would be the perfect way to spread his propaganda worldwide—if he could get it under his control.

Hitler sent operatives to set up Nazi “cells” that looked like social clubs, and they began recruiting. The Friends of New Germany, one of the first Nazi cells in Los Angeles and the one featured in Code Name Edelweiss, especially targeted veterans of the Great War in their efforts to spread the Nazi agenda. Veterans’ benefits had just been cut by President Roosevelt, and the Nazis worked their propaganda techniques on a population of men who were unemployed, battle-trained, angry, and looking for someone to blame. The Friends of New Germany pointed to the Jewish population—especially the wealthy film executives, producers, and actors in Hollywood.

Leon Lewis, a Jewish lawyer who had been keeping an eye on Adolf Hitler since the 1920s, saw what was happening and knew the Nazis must be stopped:

“I remember thinking that night, if a man like Hitler ever gains power, then God help us all. And now—” Leon Lewis’s face was as serious as the grave—“that day has come. And no one can see it but me.”

With no help from the police or government agencies—most of whom didn’t believe him—he set up a spy network of men and women who could infiltrate organizations like the Friends of New Germany and bring him information. Over the course of almost ten years, Lewis’s spies uncovered Nazi agents, American traitors, assassination plots, and plans for violence against the Jewish population of Los Angeles.

A great deal of the story of Code Name Edelweiss comes straight from the historical record of Lewis’s spy operation. My agents—Edelweiss and Agent Thirteen—are compilations of real men and women who courageously put their lives at risk to help stop the Nazi infiltration on American soil.

So why don’t we know about the Nazi plans to infiltrate Los Angeles, take over the studios, and gain power in America? Because Leon Lewis was so good at his job. He worked tirelessly to protect the people of Los Angeles until finally, in 1941, the government acted decisively against the Nazi agents in Los Angeles. The newly created FBI used Leon Lewis’s years of compiled information to find and prosecute the Friends of New Germany and other Nazi agents. Leon Lewis received none of the credit but he had accomplished his goal. He’d stopped the Nazi takeover of Los Angeles and Hollywood—and for that we owe him our deepest gratitude.


About the Story:

In the summer of 1933, a man named Adolf Hitler is the new and powerful anti-Semitic chancellor of Germany. But in Los Angeles, no-nonsense secretary Liesl Weiss has concerns much closer to home. The Great Depression is tightening its grip and Liesl is the sole supporter of two children, an opinionated mother, and a troubled brother.

Leon Lewis is a Jewish lawyer who has watched Adolf Hitler’s rise to power—and the increase in anti-Semitism in America—with growing alarm. He believes Nazi agents are working to seize control of Hollywood, the greatest propaganda machine the world has ever known. The trouble is, authorities scoff at his dire warnings.

When Liesl loses her job at MGM, her only choice is to work with Leon Lewis and the mysterious Agent Thirteen to spy on her friends and neighbors in her German American community. What Leon Lewis and his spies find is more chilling—and more dangerous—than any of them suspected.

About the Author:

Stephanie Landsem writes historical fiction for women, about women. She’s traveled the world in real life and traveled through time in her research and imagination. As she’s learned about women of the past, she’s come to realize that these long-ago women were very much like us. They loved, dreamed, and made mistakes. They struggled, failed, and triumphed. She writes to honor their lives and to bring today’s women hope and encouragement.

Stephanie makes her home in Minnesota with her husband, two cats and a dog, and frequent visits from her four adult children. Along with reading, writing, and research, she dreams about her next travel adventure—whether it be in person or on the page.

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